Shop Mobile More Submit  Join Login
×

More from DeviantArt



Details

Submitted on
October 19, 2010
Link
Thumb

Stats

Views
125
Favourites
0
Comments
72
×
{ The first chapter will be out this Friday and will be submitted every Friday from now on ok? :meow: }


The contest it now closed thank you everyone for your entries and I'm sorry for the other entrants that did not submit their entries on time how ever if you subit it I may be able to enter you as a cameo.

Thanks everyone for your entries and I'm glad to say everyone will be featured in the book and I will start writing straight away, so you will most likely see the first chapter on the 30th at the latest.

Previous information:

Details: I want you to write or draw a story in which one of your characters meets Tori for the first time. Time limit is 11th October early entries have a better chance though.

Requirements: The most interesting story will get picked, also multiple entries can be submitted. There is no limit to how gory or sexual you want it to be as long as it portrays Tori's personallity and fits into her continuity. Also no species (appart from human) or allegiance limit(Rebels or loyalist).

Prizes: Winners will appear in my up coming book "Revelation of the lost" as a character.
Characters I choose will be based on the story you submit, there is no limit of winners as all entrants will at least have one character appearing briefly in the book.

Additional info: Tori's reference = fav.me/d2zigph
If you haven't read Irken origins or Irken Rebellion by :icontoadeathax: I'll give you a brief on Tori's history.
Irken origins shows Tori's journey from a smeetling where she and her best friend Galax survived the trial to be trained as elite soldiers. Tori tries to save innocents but is repayed with an iron fist from her commanding officer Jak. Soon after Tori looks for Galax but finds him under Jak's control, Jak then effectively kills Tori and Galax but not before Galax and Tori express their feelings for each other. (Her resurection will be filled in by the book)

[At this time your story can take place]

Irken Rebellion Tori is assigned to destroy a band of rebels, after a a long chase Tori is caught off guard and killed by an assasin named Sarin who was part of project FINAL Invader. Tori is brought back by a scientist named Slight who unlocked some of Tori's past and in a rage Tori destroyed Foodcourtia and has currently been suspended from duty.
This is where the book starts.

Tori's personallity: (Note her personallity changes in the book) Tori is a pureblood and doesn't really like tank breds, she only talks if she has to, most of the time her SIR unit (VEX) will talk for her as they can talk telepathically, she is ruthless and will do anything to appease the Tallest, she enjoys a good drink, dispite being cold she's rather attractive.

Entries:
:iconergerg: ergerg.deviantart.com/art/CE-A… A thief a day
:iconspyrocynder10:
:icondraginmastr: draginmastr.deviantart.com/art… Irken barfight
:iconamyschnoo11:
:iconinvader-con: invader-con.deviantart.com/art… Past friend or past fiend

If you have any other quests feel free to ask

Alright good luck!

Tagged by: :icondamarix:

RULES:
1. Post these rules.
2. Each tagged person must post 10 things about themselves on their journal.
3. Choose 10 friends and put their icon on same page.
4. Go to their pages and send a message saying you tagged them.
5. No tag-backs.

1 I don't do art as a subject
2 I prefer writing to drawing
3 I love playing the 'miss understood bad gal'
4 I am a nerd  (Gasp!)
5 I've been a gamer since I was 7
6 I'm British but I don't like tea (How is that possible?)
7 My favourite British shows are Doctor who, Life on Mars/Ashes to ashes, Red dwarf, Mighty Boosh and the IT crowd.
8 I adore Linkara and Spoony since they are the only reviewers to make their own universes
9 Ninja's are better then Pirates but I prefer the Pirate lifestyle
10 Halloween is my favourite holiday

TAG: Anyone who reads this otherwise may Santachrist have mecry on your soul!

Dansdaughter :fuzzydemon:

P.s. I'm sciencier! :icondrinsanoplz:
  • Mood: Joy
  • Listening to: Sunburn [MUSE]
  • Reading: Revelation of the lost
  • Watching: AT4W reviews
  • Playing: Reach
  • Eating: Chicken noodles
  • Drinking: water
Add a Comment:
 
:icontoadeathax:
ToaDeathax Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2010
Awsome! start the count down!
Reply
:icondansdaughter:
dansdaughter Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol 24 style *Bleep, bleep, Bleep, bleep*
Reply
:icontoadeathax:
ToaDeathax Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2010
Lol Can't wait :la: reach reminds me I'm behind schedual :ohnoes:
Reply
:icondansdaughter:
dansdaughter Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh noes not good :/
Reply
:icontoadeathax:
ToaDeathax Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2010
Tell m bout it I got caught up in CF XD
Reply
:icondraginmastr:
Draginmastr Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2010
I can't wait until Friday! Who won? WHO WON??? :iconexcitedzimplz:
Reply
:icondansdaughter:
dansdaughter Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Technally everyone did but you'll see who got main roles in the story
Reply
:icondraginmastr:
Draginmastr Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2010
Yeah, that's what I meant.
Reply
:icondansdaughter:
dansdaughter Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol well you'll soon find out ;P
Reply
:icondraginmastr:
Draginmastr Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2010
Nuuuu! I caaaan't waaaait!
Reply
:iconergerg:
ergerg Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2010
LOL yay were all wiiiiners! :iconyaaayplz:
Reply
:icondansdaughter:
dansdaughter Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconexcitedgirplz: yay
Reply
:iconergerg:
ergerg Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2010
:iconexciteddibplz::iconsaysplz: Yaaaaay!
Reply
:iconinvader-con:
invader-con Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2010
soooo WHO THE HECK WON!
Reply
:icondansdaughter:
dansdaughter Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Uh everyone? Didn't you read the description :iconooplz:
Reply
:iconinvader-con:
invader-con Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2010
O-O oh damn -_- i should have done that first lol
Reply
:icondansdaughter:
dansdaughter Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol
Reply
:iconinvader-con:
invader-con Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2010
wait will only one be picked or like 2 or 3 people
Reply
:icondansdaughter:
dansdaughter Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Depends what you mean every one will at least have a cameo
Reply
:iconinvader-con:
invader-con Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2010
i hope i get picked i hope i get picked
Reply
:icontoadeathax:
ToaDeathax Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2010
:la: OMG I HAVE AN IDEA FOR WHAT WOULD HAPEN IF MODERN TORI MET JENROCK (the PO'd Vortian Ex Commander of Des-pear) You mind if I write it? :la: you don't have to use it just thought of it XD
Reply
:icondansdaughter:
dansdaughter Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
No that's a great idea go for it! :iconexplodelaplz:
Reply
:icontoadeathax:
ToaDeathax Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010
:dummy: YES!
Reply
:icondansdaughter:
dansdaughter Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehe I exploded :meow:
Reply
:icontoadeathax:
ToaDeathax Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010
*sigh* I'll get the ducktape
Reply
:icondansdaughter:
dansdaughter Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconhurrhurrplz: lol
Reply
:icontoadeathax:
ToaDeathax Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010
lolz
Reply
:icondraginmastr:
Draginmastr Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2010
[link]
WEWT
Reply
:icondansdaughter:
dansdaughter Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh yh could you give me a brief description of Venn & Tek's personallity and history to give me a good idea of how to write them thanks :meow:
Reply
:icondraginmastr:
Draginmastr Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010
Hmm... This is as brief as I can go. :iconsorryplz:
But then, the story itself is around 5 pages.

Venn was born to two parents, (DNA recombination) but in a tank similar to the ones used commonly now. After that she was given up to an Irken training facility to train for the required amount of time. After that she was a scientist on Vort for a while, then came back to complete her training as an Elite. After many years she was chosen to be an Invader in Operation Impending Doom I but when she got outside Zim was rampaging in the battle mech and, with the lazer cannon, shot her across the face, leaving the gash that is there today.
Tek's past is sketchy. All I know is that he was organically born (Pureblood), a defective, lives in Scrapyard, Irk, is a brilliant mechanic who will always try to squeeze a few more monies from you and took Venn under his wing after getting nearly killed by Zim in Operation Impending Doom I.
Reply
:icondansdaughter:
dansdaughter Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
No that's good! So uh what's their personalities like?
Reply
:icondraginmastr:
Draginmastr Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010
Venn is fiercely protective of her friends, courageous and intellegent, but she gets into trouble, forcing herself into others' conflicts.
Tek is clever and calculating, taking whatever he can find of one's insecurities and use them to his advantage; obviously there are some exceptions. However he's too impulsive and careless.
Reply
:icondansdaughter:
dansdaughter Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! Who would you pick as a character if you had to pick ?
Reply
:icondraginmastr:
Draginmastr Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010
So.... which do I like more?
Reply
:icondansdaughter:
dansdaughter Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah kinda :P
Reply
(1 Reply)
:icondansdaughter:
dansdaughter Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Coolio!!
Reply
:iconamyschnoo11:
amyschnoo11 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Is there any specific place this should happen?
Reply
:icondansdaughter:
dansdaughter Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Nope just the time frame, everything else is up to you :)
Reply
:iconamyschnoo11:
amyschnoo11 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome :)
Reply
:icondraginmastr:
Draginmastr Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010
This sounds like fun! I'll get to work right away!
Reply
:icondansdaughter:
dansdaughter Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Alright! Can't wait to see it :meow:
Reply
:icondraginmastr:
Draginmastr Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010
A question, also. This is after Tori dies but before Foodcourtia is destroyed, correct?
Reply
:icondansdaughter:
dansdaughter Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah after she dies for the first time XD
Reply
:icondraginmastr:
Draginmastr Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010
Tori apparently dies a lot :XD:
Reply
:icondansdaughter:
dansdaughter Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol what doesn't kill makes you stronger but what does kill you makes you stronger and p*sses you off XD
Reply
:icondraginmastr:
Draginmastr Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010
I'll have to remember that one :lmao:
Reply
:icondansdaughter:
dansdaughter Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
:XD: Haha lucky it's hard to forget
Reply
:iconspyrocynder10:
spyrocynder10 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ooo sounds interesting! Can I join?? :3
Reply
:icondansdaughter:
dansdaughter Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah sure! :iconsocuteplz:
Reply
:iconspyrocynder10:
spyrocynder10 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yayness!
Reply
Add a Comment: